Writing in my life
200702174 EIT
Yoon Jin-Soo (Noah) English writing class(Tue 78)
In 1989, I was born in Incheon when Dracaena Fragrans bloomed.
When I was born my mother was teacher in high school and my father
was studying for C.P.A. My mom quit the school soon and my father
passed the exam.
My mom was educator so she was very interested in my education.
She taught me Korean and Numbers through playing games. Stickers
were put on most of stuff in house, large board that Korea Alphabets
were written on it. Because of my mother's efforts, I could be awaken
to Korean earlier than other children. Sometimes my mom said I was
very good at learning language, like genius, I don't think so.
Since I got in about learning Korean, mom started reading traditional
fairy tales to me. I can't remember precisely but I guess, I was mad at
listening those stories. One day, my mom was tired at my persistent
importune, she finally recorded her voice that telling stories and few
days later she bought a large set of story tapes. I remember that I
always listened story tapes until I slept. Few months later I began to read
fairy tales and was immersed in adventures and love stories in book.
When I played with my friends, I used to be a heroine of beautiful story
of traditional fairy tales.
The year that I graduated elementary school and became middle school
student, I encountered 'Novel'. My first novel was 'Dream of seagull'.
Jonathan's humane anguish and desire for flying to his dream was very
impressive to me. It seemed like representing Korean student's feelings.
It was so different from formal writing in textbooks. So I started to read
novels haphazardly because I fascinated in delicate and realistic writing.
My second novel was 'The old man and the sea'. The old man who
lost brilliant glory of past introspected his ego while catching a huge
Spearfish and fighting with group of sharks. That story was so touching
to young student. I totally got in novels because of attractions of these
telling writer's intention through interesting stories. After that, I met
a turning point.
When I just entranced into a high school, I thought about writing novel.
I really wanted it because it seemed like very exciting work. Many
interesting episodes in a big outline, attractive heroines and metaphorical
description in conflict between characters, all of those things was kind
of ideal thing to me. So I started to formulate the outline of my own novel
in spare moment, and then I created characters and episodes, organized
relations of those stories and people. One year later, synopsis of my own
novel was completed. In winter vacation, I started to write my novel on
computer. Making dialogues, describing action scene, delicate
explanation of stuff or landscape were too difficult but I was pleased.
I repeated rewriting over and over again, and finally I wrote 2 episodes
of 14 completely. I wondered response of people about my novel, so I
posted it on online novel club. Unexpectedly, reputation was wonderful.
Hits of my novel exceeded 20,000 per one posting. Many people wrote
comment like 'Keep writing and give me that now!!". I became
honorary writer of that club and wrote my novel continuously. But I
had to quit writing when I was promoted to third grades of high
school because of entrance examination.
Looking back on it now, it was just a dream. I love writing and reading
but I don't want to be a writer. Because almost writers can't earn money
enough for living. Same as me, many people give up their dream. Nowadays,
'Writing' became a way for study. People learn 'Writing' for their grades,
not for itself. But for me, 'Writing' is my pleasure and hobby although I
don't want to write for living. I still remember the quiver and happiness
when I felt while I was writing. I wand to keep 'Writing' as my pleasure
now and forever.
Chang-Min Ji / 200503311
ReplyDelete1.I like his unique writing story. Because it's fun.
2.Main point is episodes of his reading and writing novels.
3.The most impressing point is his own novel recorded 20,000points per one posting.
4.Generally it has some mistakes on grammar. So I took a little long time to read it. But it doesn't have any unclear part when it comes to understanding contents.
5.Letter font is not fixed. I don't know why a text has two font styles.
201181021 HUIYEONG KIM
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this literacy autobiography is the writer use the chronological order, so it was easy to read.
2. The main point seems to be the anecdotes and thoughts about writing.
3. I wonder why he used these words.
‘When Dracaena Fragrans bloomed’
It arouses my curiosity about this autobiography.
4. "One day, my mom was tired at my persistent importune."
It is grammatically wrong.
5. I think this autobiography is good enough.
1. I really like this writing because I think he tried to write this essay with various different words to enrich the story.
ReplyDelete2. The main point of this writing would be he developed his writing skills by writing novels on line.
3. He described his club activities in detail,which was excellent, so I felt like I could see his school life vividly.
4. I dont get the meaning of the some sentences in the 5th paragraph like "Many interesting episodes in ~ ideal thing to me."
This is vague.
5. Overall, this is great work, if you correct some grammatical mistakes, It's will be fantastic!!
.
Second draft
ReplyDeleteMy literacy autobiography
Yoon Jin Soo
In 1989, I was born in Incheon When Dracaena Fragrans bloomed. When I was born, my mother was teacher in high school and my father was studying for C.P.A. My mom quit the school soon and my father passed the exam.
My mom was educator so she was very interested in my education. She taught me Korean and Numbers through playing games. Stickers were put on most of stuff in house.
And she also hanged up large board that Korea Alphabets were written on it. Because of my mother's efforts, I could be awaken to Korean earlier than other children. Sometimes my mom said I was very good at learning language, like genius, but I don't think so.
Since I got in about learning Korean, mom started reading traditional fairy tales to me. I can't remember precisely but I guess, I was mad at listening those stories. One day, my mom was tired at my persistent importunity, she finally recorded her voice that telling stories and few days later she bought a large set of story tapes. After that, I always listened story tapes until I slept. Few months later I began to read fairy tales and was immersed in adventures and love stories in book. When I played with my friends, I used to be a heroine in beautiful story of traditional fairy tales.
The year that I graduated elementary school and became middle school student, I
encountered 'Novel'. My first novel was 'Dream of seagull'. Jonathan's humane anguish and desire for flying was very impressive to me. It seemed like representation Korean student's feelings. It was so different from formal writing in textbooks. So I started to read
novels haphazardly because I was fascinated in delicate and realistic writing. My second novel was 'The old man and the sea'. The old man who lost brilliant glory of past thought about his ego while struggling against a huge Spearfish and fighting with group of sharks. That story was so touching to young student. I totally got in novels. Because it is attractive spot that tells about writer's intention through interesting stories. After that, I met a first turning point.
When I just entranced into a high school, I thought about writing novel. I really wanted it because it seemed like very exciting work. Many interesting episodes in a big outline, attractive heroines and sensitive metaphor about conflict between characters, all of those things was kind of ideal thing to me. So I started to formulate the outline of my own novel in spare moment, and then I created characters and episodes, organized relations of those stories and people. One year later, synopsis of my own novel was completed. In winter vacation, I started to write my novel on
computer. Making dialogues, describing action scene, delicate explanation of stuff or landscape were too difficult but I was excited. I rewrited over and over again, and finally I wrote 2 episodes completely. I wondered about people's respons for my novel, so I posted it on online novel club. Unexpectedly, reputation was wonderful. Hits of my novel exceeded 20,000 per one posting. Many people wrote comment like 'Keep writing and give me that now!!". I became honorary writer of that club and wrote my novel continuously. But I had to quit writing when I was promoted to third grades of high school. Because I had to study for SAT.
Looking back on it now, it was just a dream. I love writing and reading but I don't want to be a writer. Because almost writers can't earn money enough for living. Same as me, many people give up their dream. Nowadays, 'Writing' became a way for study. People learn 'Writing' for their grades, not for itself. But for me, 'Writing' is my pleasure and hobby although I don't want to write for living. I still remember the quiver and happiness that felt while I was writing. I wand to keep 'Writing' as my pleasure now and forever.
Most of my classmates pointed out grammartical
mistakes. So I tried to fixed up.
Park Jin-kyung 200904082
ReplyDelete1. I really like this writing because I think he tried to write this essay with various different words to enrich the story.
2. The main point of this writing would be he developed his writing skills by writing novels on line.
3. He described his club activities in detail,which was excellent, so I felt like I could see his school life vividly.
4. I dont get the meaning of the some sentences in the 5th paragraph like "Many interesting episodes in ~ ideal thing to me."
This is vague.
5. Overall, this is great work, if you correct some grammatical mistakes, It's will be fantastic!!