About English Introduction in childhood
EIT 200702174
Yoon Jin-Soo
number of pregnant who go abroad is increasing. This phenomenon
is called 'Baby Smuggling'. Most of pregnant say about reason 'For
English Education. Thus, there is 'Early English Education' fever in Korea.
In part of this, many English kindergartens and English babysitters are
appearing. Of course, English is important for baby's future. However,
'Early English Education' won't that helpful for children.
At first, why is English important? Global village sudden appeared
because of rapid Increasing IT industry. So, exchanges between countries
are risen, and these made 'Bilingual' Important. Many people want to
teach English to their young baby because, they have most powerful
'Language learning ability' of them is most powerful in their life.
But, Excessive studying in childhood will be harmful for children.
The world's suggestion is rapidly changing from individual academic
ability to creative and passion. Companies are changing their job
interview form and everyone knows that most of successful men of this
time, didn't graduate college. Then, how about twenty or thirty years
later future? It might be very different from now. However, forced
education to children can dry off creative and passion completely.
Many children lost their time for do some interesting things to forced
education. They are always under the stress and it could be harmful
for children. Stop teaching same as others and let them to doing
something interesting would be helpful.
If parents want to their children success, they should play with
their children and reading books to their children. These activities
can raise children's creative. When they find their aptitude and get
interested in it, they would be very passionate people. So just stop
teaching 'Useful' knowledge(kind of English) to young children.
Teach them about funny playing and make them to discover their
own ability.
201181021 Huiyeong Kim
ReplyDelete1. What I like this piece of writing is to use an extensive vocabulary of English.
2. The main point seems early Egnlish education is not good for children.
3. Especially, I like the words "Baby Smuggling"
because I think it is one of the big problems in Korean society.
4.Everything was clear to me.
5. If you correct some grammatical errors, it will be better.
Hwang Yoo Jung 200904349
ReplyDelete1. What I like about this piece of writing is to express his opinion clearly.Especially, I think evidence in body paragraphs is very persuasive.
2. The main point is, I think, forced 'early Egnlsh education' is harmful to children.
3. Some lines below struck me strong because cause and effect seems to be developed very logically.
"At first, why is English important? Global village sudden appeared because of rapid Increasing IT industry. So, exchanges between countries are risen, and these made 'Bilingual' Important."
4. I'm afraid the followng needs to be reorganized.
"Many people want to teach English to their young baby because, they have most powerful'Language learning ability' of them is most powerful in their life."
5. There are some grammtical errors, so they make readers a little confused. If corrected, your essay could be understood better.
Yoon Jin Soo
ReplyDeleteSecond draft
Number of pregnant who go abroad is increasing. This phenomenon is called 'Baby Smuggling'. Most of pregnant say about reason
'English Education'. As you see, there is 'Early English Education' fever in Korea.
In part of this, kindergartens that teach English and babysitters who speak English are increasing. Of course, English is important for baby's future. However,'Early English Education' won't that helpful for children.
At first, why is English important? Global village suddenly appeared because of rapidly increasing IT industry. So, exchanges between countries are risen, and these happens made 'Bilingual' Important. Many people want to
teach English to their young baby because, they have most powerful 'Language learning ability' in their life.
But, Excessive study in childhood will be harmful for children. The world's suggestion is rapidly changing from individual academic
ability to creative and passion. Companies are changing their job interview form and everyone knows that most of successful men in this ime, didn't graduate college. Then let's think about it. How many things gonna change in twenty or thirty years from now? It might be very different from now. However, forced education can dry off creative and passion completely.
Many children lost their time for do something interesting because of forced education. They are always under the stress and it could be harmful for children. Stop teaching same as others and let them to doing something interesting would be helpful.
If parents want to their children success, they should play with them and reading books to their children. These activities can raise children's creative. When they find their aptitude for something interesting, they would be very passionate people. So just stop teaching 'Useful' knowledge(kind of English). Teach them about funny playing and make them to discover their own ability.